Naruto

The glow on the drawing is very nice along with the seeming transparency almost as though it was Naruto's soul. I consider that there might be too much negative space on your drawing's top. Also the necklace should have a more round glow of light around it, since it has an implicit downwards triangular form that doesn't fit what a glow would be like. A background with either trees or something peaceful might help your composition unless you're really looking for it to seem like it's Naruto's childish soul. His eyes are absolutely perfect as well as the hair, and I love what you did to make him look childish. Great job!